Hello! need feedback for my website. Currently using a temporary web host. WIll be looking for a reseller plan soon.

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On the main page, rework the 2nd and 3rd paragraphs to deal with your expertise and not how new you are. May be more of your philosphy in approaching web design.

On the "about" page, I'd remove a lot of the personal information if this is your business site. At the age of 20, why would I trust you with my web-based livelyhood? Without the age, for all I know you have 15 years of experience. This lack of information may help. Esp with the "graduating soon" removed. Also, you don't want information that must be updated constantly. Every year you'll have to update your age.

The first quote on the portfolio page needs to be reworked. Gramatically it falls apart near the end.

Outside of that, I really like the look. It's elegant and simple. The flash at the top is not obtrusive. It's subtle and I feel it works well on your site.

Oh, that's kool! I just found out what the mouse does in the flash. Slick!

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And where is your page? I see only catalog of files. Maybe index file is missing?

"Screenhost 3" looks good to me.

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