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Old 10-Apr-2004, 05:11
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Hi,

I've just finished most of my new website, now available in english too. Could you please check the layout and the text. I'm dutch, so my english won't be perfect.

Thanks in advance.

http://www.freezemedia.net

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Old 10-Apr-2004, 11:39
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The design seems alright. However, it needs to be more liquid. It needs to look nice on 1024x768 as well as 800x600. I attached a screenshot of it on 800x600, since there was a slight error on the top right in Mozilla FireFox 0.8.

On a 1024 x 768 resolution, there is a ton of white space on the right, and it makes the page look like it was designed for 800x600 only.
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Old 10-Apr-2004, 12:04
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The design seems alright. However, it needs to be more liquid. It needs to look nice on 1024x768 as well as 800x600. I attached a screenshot of it on 800x600, since there was a slight error on the top right in Mozilla FireFox 0.8.

On a 1024 x 768 resolution, there is a ton of white space on the right, and it makes the page look like it was designed for 800x600 only.

How do I view the attachment?
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Old 10-Apr-2004, 15:36
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Wow, I've started off right. I'm asking for a spell-check, and I can't even write design... (the title says desing)
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How do I view the attachment?
Wait for me to upload it because I forgot to lol
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Old 10-Apr-2004, 18:37
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Wow, I've started off right. I'm asking for a spell-check, and I can't even write design... (the title says desing)

Hello freezemedia,

I will fix the typo in the title in a moment...

About the site, looks OK on a FireFox 0.8 with 1024 screen; but what's with the 'white space' on the right? I am moving my mouse frantically around expecting some gizmo to appear there, but in vain! ??:

I looked at just one page - this one requires you to spend some time on it again, for sure. (stuff in italics = you need to re-word, stuff in bold = typos). I did this at a glance so someone else may pick up on things I missed of course.
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Create an image, that’s what FREEZEMEDIA does.

Ever thought about having a website? FREEZEMEDIA can take care of your presence on the web. Whether you need an online library, a personal or a corporate site, FREEZEMEDIA can help you making decisions leading to a dynamic result.

ASP, PHP, HTML, Flash, it's all possible. Even print design now is a possibility. Creating your image, advice you on communication and finally creating interaction, that's what FREEZEMEIDA can do for you.

Pricing is very difficult because when a project starts, there is no clear image on what it's going to be. In most cases the first 3 steps are talking so FREEZEMEDIA can get an insight in your world. With that image, a plan can be made on handling the project.

The flow of projects FREEZEMEDIA can handle isn't very large because each project deserves full attention.

Do you want to create an image, contact FREEZEMEDIA now.

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Old 10-Apr-2004, 18:57
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How about this?

It's very difficult to write in English and make it sound natural. I hope this is better.

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Create an image, that’s what FREEZEMEDIA does.

Ever thought about having a website? FREEZEMEDIA can take care of your presence on the web. Whether you need an online library, a personal or a corporate site, FREEZEMEDIA can help you finding your way in the dynamic world.

ASP, PHP, HTML, Flash, it's all possible. Even print design now is a possibility. Creating your image, advicing you about communication and finally creating interaction, that's what FREEZEMEDIA can do for you.

If you would like to know more about FREEZEMEDIA's prices, please send an e-mail containing your request. Prices are not mentioned because they can deffer for each project.

FREEZEMEDIA can only handle a small amount of projects at the same time because each project derveres full attention.

Do you want to create an image? Contact FREEZEMEDIA now!

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I can't read the right menu (at all) without hovering the mouse over it...
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Old 11-Apr-2004, 10:53
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I can't read the right menu (at all) without hovering the mouse over it...
Seriously? The difference is quite big according to me...But hey, I'm asking for your check so thanks anyway, I'll see if I can change it a bit..

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What's your resolution / screen type?
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I have an idea that might work out nice. But I will need a copy of the header image without the grey part over it.
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