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Old 06-Oct-2007, 03:12
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Haiku?


Five syllables here
Then go seven syllables
And mention weather.

OK, so my attempt at a haiku was horrible.

I'm really easy to please, though, so does anyone have any haiku or senryu to share with me?
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Old 06-Oct-2007, 13:17
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Re: Haiku?


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...any haiku...

C Programmer's Lament:

Added just one line.
Forgot the semicolon.
Now it won't compile.

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Old 07-Nov-2007, 08:31
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Re: Haiku?


Good Haiku. Are you Japanese?
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Old 07-Nov-2007, 10:50
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Re: Haiku?


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Good Haiku
Thanks. (Actually I might have got it from a Bumper Sticker somewhere in Silicon Valley---I don't really remember.) There's no accounting for taste, and actually I was hoping to see better stuff from some of the creative minds who visit gidforums from time to time.
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Are you Japanese?
White-bread Small-town Southern American, transplanted to West Coast, USA.

Although my written sentences are sometimes long and tortured, the precise and concisely structured rhythm of haiku sometimes is a good match for my choppy thought processes.

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