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Old 14-Nov-2006, 12:04
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[Please review tell me what you think of the photos?
what I can do to make it load faster?
If you like the content?
if you want to go fishing after reading?
http://www.puertovallartafish.com/allaboutpuertovallartafishing.html


http://www.puertovallartafish.com
EMAIL="info@puertovallartafish.com"]info@puertovallartafish.com[/email]
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Old 16-Nov-2006, 07:40
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The page is not valid HTML. See the http://validator.w3.org/check?verbose=1&uri=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.puertovallartafish.com%2Fallaboutpuertovallartafishing.html.

There are grammatical errors. There are missing periods and commas.
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Puerto Vallarta Fishing grounds Banderas bay we have been fishing in Puerto Vallarta Mexico the last 7 years and it just keeps getting better Puerto Vallarta's banderas bay is 40 miles wide you can ...

Image fishing_photos_015-251x211.jpg seems to be grainy, like it was expanded from a smaller image.

Image abemar_button-359x114.jpg looks fuzzy.

Some of the pictures look stretched, like the sizes are not specified right.

But it does look like you have fun fishing.
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I agree with KenJackson, your photos look kind of blurry. Especially the picture of the boat. I personally think your pictures need to be eye catching so that people do get more enticed with your whole idea of a great fishing trip. I noticed there are also too many borders within your pictures. But I guess your overall layout is fine.
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I think you might want to reduce the number of images on your index page as it takes quite a while to load your site. Layout and colour seems alright with to me.
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I'd go fishing with you, looks great.

With regards to the site, I have to say that I agree with all of the above. The grammar and punctuation requires a lot of work. Also the clicking on the photos thing confuses me. Why do you have an email link on the 3rd photo. The link on the second photo doesn't seem to work properly.

I don't know about anyone else but I get put off by the huge blocks of text that you have in various places on the site (including, importantly, the home page). I would advise splitting it in to sections with titles or at the very least paragraphing it. To be honest if I wasn't reviewing your site and was reading it, I doubt I could have got to the end.

Hope I haven't been too critical because generally the site looks great. It is designed a load better than I could have done.

Good luck
 

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